The Magic Door

I wrote this description of a imaginary place, using similies, metaphors, activated nouns and strong verbs so the reader could imagine the place clearly. Here is my description.

As I walk up the stone path, I go through the dusty, dirty, rusty door with three locks. As I walk through, the world changes to the secret world. I walk between the ragged walls, as the dark green vines creep like snakes in the jungles of Africa. I leap effortlessly over the bumps like a jumping spider. The tough dark floor has millions of fossils. I take the fossils and keep on going. The dark walls come in like the jaws of a crocodile. I walk as if someone with a car is chasing me. I'm out of my world. The door creeps closed and locks itself. Now I go and hide my fossils and run away.